Contacting my OP-ED Writer

My Original Email to Jessica Bennett:

Hi Ms. Bennett,

I am a junior in high school and in my AP English class we have created blogs. Our assignment was to pick an OP-ED writer and analyze some of their articles. I read through some of your articles and I found them very interesting, and I like your style of writing. Our latest assignment was to pick an article that the OP-ED writer wrote and shape an argument. I read your article, The Problem with Women on Reality TV, http://www.newsweek.com/2010/11/11/the-problem-with-women-on-reality-tv.html. I then picked out what I thought was your claim and concession in the article. Then I found supports for your claim and stated whether I agreed or disagreed with the article. The link to my blog is http://paulinecdearing.blogspot.com/ if you would like to check it out. I was wondering if you had any related issues to your article that you would like to share with me, like the women's role in society or how reality television has affected people? Or if you think there are any other articles you have written that you think would help me in learning how to shape an argument? Any advice at all on being an OP-ED writer or any tips you have for students learning to write would be greatly appreciated. 

Thank you so much for your time!

Pauline Dearing